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tudorcrack
May 1st, 2008, 04:25 PM
Hi there,

Want to find your opinion about my landing page...

Your feedback is greatly appreciated and welcomed.

Is this page enticing enough to make you sign-up?

http://www.fastmoneydotcom.com

If YES/NO, why? What should I add/remove to
make it more compelling?

Thank you,
Tudor Ciurescu
redz
May 1st, 2008, 04:34 PM
Its looks sort of plain, try adding some images in. Mabe integrate some video's in it too which will get people to sign up.
louiecorp
May 1st, 2008, 10:51 PM
i would have to say it is to plain also.. just text..sometimes you need images to grab more attention, videos would also be great
tudorcrack
May 4th, 2008, 07:01 AM
I need some review for it...

Please tell me what do you like and what you don`t like at it....

http://www.fastmoneydotcom.com

i added some video on the page...

Tell me you honest opinion

All the best,
Tudor Ciurescu
rqlguevarra
May 5th, 2008, 05:52 AM
very simple and plain.
Masters
May 8th, 2008, 11:19 AM
Add a border and greyish background. :)
dublife
June 4th, 2008, 06:53 AM
You are missing a header, footer, and background!

You may be doomed without it.

:sleep:
AMFM
June 17th, 2008, 08:40 PM
I like the way you used different colors and the bold feature.

You might want to check out some new fonts like the titanium font or the digital font which can be found at www.fontmarketplace.com to help differentiate yourself.

Good luck!

AMFM
lilac22
June 20th, 2008, 03:58 PM
The site looks like the typical single page spam site.Sorry, when I see a site like this I just skip it because it signals to me that you are trying to sell me something even though you are offering a freebie.
cordyceps
July 10th, 2008, 11:18 PM
I think this is a simple site..
You should make a picture or some images in cause if you don't make it. I think the visitors wouldn't stay for long time.
Happy guy
July 24th, 2008, 12:06 PM
It's pretty obvious it's a site that wants to sell you something right away. You might get some noobs to convert but it doesn't look it will do well long term. Sorry for the negativity, just being honest.:sad:
zenmagic
July 27th, 2008, 03:18 AM
Actually you have a great combination of fonts and colours for the letter's texts, but maybe you can add a banner on top or probably a picture of the free report that you are offering? I think that will make the squeeze page more appealing.
alexg89
July 27th, 2008, 09:50 AM
firstly I'd move it to the center and spruce it up with images (maybe some web 2.0 buttons?)
Freedom40
July 28th, 2008, 06:24 PM
It needs some graphics to spruce it up and the domain name with the words fast money, makes me think it's a little suspect.
DHMN69
July 29th, 2008, 04:34 AM
While I'm not really one to discuss how to really make a website flashy and stuff (my photo website is rather plain but people are coming to it).... THAT website looks like a carbon copy.. and if you look at the 'signature' of Tudor Ciurescu(whatver it says) there a shadow or something of the same signature that makes it look like it was whited out and written over the top of it. Maybe that's on purpose but until I zoomed way in it looked like a name written over someone elses.