My New Graphic

[marcdavid]

Hi Guys,
I'm new. What do you think about my new graphic ?
You can see it there :
http://www.xwebgraphics.com/customers/marc-david/
It will be the graphic of my new ebook in French.
The text is :
"Now, you can make your dreams come true"
Thank You, Marc David.
PS : I'm sorry about my bad english (I'm swiss).

I've made a mistake, i'm sorry, i'm not in the good forum.