AdWords Landing Page

[Codrut_Turcanu]

Hi there.

I need your opinion about this web site:

http://www.BestAdwordsSecrets.com

Is this squeeze page powerful enough to model it after?

Thank you,
Codrut Turcanu.

[andyz]

Not so bad I guess, but I have seen squeeze pages that entice me much more.

It is so formula like.

[mactep]

It's a very good example of a squidoo page.

But we don't know how it works/convert

Care to share if it's working?

[muskratviking]

One of my buddies says he does well with http://squeezepagedesign.com/
Although, I have never used them myself.

[samdeane]

Quite like the copy though it is a bit rambling

- dont think the blue works in the heading nor the red keyline box. Would prefer if this was within its own white box with a background colour or logo maybe an inch or two from each side to hold everything in.

Starting off with a quotation mark is good but you gotta put one at the end of the quote!

Close space at the last paragraph please.

You are almost there - so long as you dont take criticism to heart - feedback is the breakfast of champions.

Best wishes with it

Sam

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